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Offline raggamuffin

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"Lost"
« on: May 30, 2014, 08:17:11 AM »
Something I wrote yesterday. It's my first poem in about 8 years. Was having a bad day symptom wise yesterday whilst at work. I started writing this down and began shedding silent tears at my desk. Not sure why, thankfully nobody saw.



Somewhere to go.
I stumble.
Something out there,
In the dark.
My eyes.

Brought down to me.
This star.
Call out in the dark.
The light we feel.
Please...

Without shelter,
Your signs.
Believe in this voice,
Broken.

Come on,
Outside.
I am waiting...



Ed
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Re: "Lost"
« Reply #1 on: May 30, 2014, 08:40:17 AM »
I have a terrible time with poetry, but the title helps as does the brevity, the rhythm, the feeling.

Thank you for sharing. Don't worry about tears, they are a good release.
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