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Offline KellboRose

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I couldn't sleep so I decided to write
« on: June 19, 2014, 04:40:31 PM »
Achieving then breathing
One step then two
Don't let dark seasons overshadow you
In your own time
For no one else
Live your own life and succeed for yourself
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Re: I couldn't sleep so I decided to write
« Reply #1 on: June 19, 2014, 04:57:00 PM »
pretty
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Re: I couldn't sleep so I decided to write
« Reply #2 on: June 19, 2014, 06:09:43 PM »
Thanks. This started out as part of another poem I wrote but I was half asleep when I wrote it and I wasn't sure if it sounded like it fit together or not so I just made them into two different ones lol
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Re: I couldn't sleep so I decided to write
« Reply #3 on: June 26, 2014, 04:32:49 PM »
Second one of yours that I liked! Thanks for sharing!   :bigsmile:
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Re: I couldn't sleep so I decided to write
« Reply #4 on: June 27, 2014, 07:33:28 AM »
Thanks I appreciate the feedback.  I wasn't sure if anyone would like it.  :)
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Re: I couldn't sleep so I decided to write
« Reply #5 on: June 27, 2014, 08:29:30 AM »
Very nice. Whether it is poetry, short pieces, long pieces, journals, diaries, whatever, writing can be magical.
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Re: I couldn't sleep so I decided to write
« Reply #6 on: June 27, 2014, 04:18:17 PM »
Thanks I appreciate the feedback.  I wasn't sure if anyone would like it.  :)

Very much so.  :winking0008:
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Re: I couldn't sleep so I decided to write
« Reply #7 on: July 06, 2014, 11:44:51 PM »
Thanks guys. Your right tinam.  I used to write all the time and I loved it.  I haven't written anything for a long time until recently though but I think it's something I need to get into again because it really can help :)
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Re: I couldn't sleep so I decided to write
« Reply #8 on: August 27, 2014, 01:22:41 PM »
nice
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