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Offline KellboRose

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A poem I wrote half asleep lol
« on: June 19, 2014, 04:14:37 PM »
Appreciate the small things
Because they are fleeting
Barely beginning
Before they're ceasing
No less meaning
Understanding or feeling
A moment in time
Can't be defined
As less real than a larger unit of time
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Re: A poem I wrote half asleep lol
« Reply #1 on: June 19, 2014, 05:08:03 PM »
Very nice.  I like it.
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Re: A poem I wrote half asleep lol
« Reply #2 on: June 19, 2014, 06:11:47 PM »
Thanks :)
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Re: A poem I wrote half asleep lol
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2014, 04:00:33 PM »
Wow, this is really great. Part of my struggle with anxiety is constantly worrying about time and running out of time (partly fear of death but also just general time) and this is a really great reminder for me that every moment is important, even if you're not doing something "important" in that moment.

Thanks for sharing :)
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Re: A poem I wrote half asleep lol
« Reply #4 on: August 14, 2014, 02:52:56 PM »
Thanks for your feedback. I'm glad you liked it :)
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