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Offline Trinity

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one of my poems.
« on: September 13, 2013, 10:26:28 PM »
God I know your not to blame, but this is driving me insane.
Anxious thoughts and constant fear, I just wish you were here.
To feel what I am going through and take it all away, every night I talk to you all I do is pray.
Asking for your guidance and help for me to heal, I need you more then ever, please tell me this ain't real.
It feels like a living nightmare my world is torn apart, I sit here as I write, pouring from my heart.
I can't escape my mind, its running all the time, the only relief I get, is sleeping and these rhymes.
Im worried about the present, past and future too, worrying is not me, now its all I do.
I used to feel happy, energetic and free, now I am frustrated, this is not me.
How did this ever happen, how did it get so bad, please god I beg you for the life that I once had.
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Offline PinkIcePrincess

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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #1 on: October 07, 2013, 07:28:50 AM »
Trinity,
  Beautiful Poem and so very true to how most of us feel everyday.. Including me.

  Thank you for sharing with us..
  Keep writing you are doing great!

  PinkIcePrincess
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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #2 on: October 14, 2013, 02:13:02 PM »
Thank you Pink! I have a few others I will get around to sharin!
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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #3 on: October 21, 2013, 11:51:04 AM »
Trinity, This is such a beautiful poem!
Like PinkIcePrincess said alot of us  can relate so much to this..

Thanks for sharing :)

        -Ashley
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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #4 on: November 16, 2013, 01:31:08 PM »
very interesting poem, the way you say 'the life I once had' , to be honest with you I think anxiety is a gene some are born with , I  think its always there its just maybe at one stage in your life it wasn't there as much, but I find the older I get well now anyway ha, I understand it and am starting to feel myself because I learn't what brings it out in me,   its not as easy to bring it out now thankfully, depression would bring it out, bad experiences , over thinking, it would be like that for almost everyone though
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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2014, 06:57:19 AM »
*wipes off a single tear* beautiful, really beautiful, just describes my and others feelings so well.
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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #6 on: February 07, 2014, 02:28:35 AM »
Trinity, this is a beautiful poem. It spoke to me and I'm sure to others. The last few lines especially resonate with similar thoughts I've had recently about faith in the aftermath of trauma and anxiety. Thank you for sharing. Sending you good, strong vibes.
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There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you. -Maya Angelou

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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #7 on: February 07, 2014, 07:48:39 AM »
That was beautiful, thank you for sharing. I find a lot of comfort in writing too, maybe one day i will share one of mine, not that brave yet... your courage is admirable tho. Thank you.
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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #8 on: February 08, 2014, 12:50:24 PM »
Thank you guys. I wrote this through one of my rough patches. I hope you guys get feeling better... hang in there! I'm not doing as bad as I once was and when I get bad off I try to remember a time where I was worse and it passed.
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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #9 on: February 08, 2014, 02:18:49 PM »
I can't escape my mind, its running all the time,

That did justice, very deep. I like your poem.
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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #10 on: February 08, 2014, 02:21:19 PM »
Great poem Trinity!
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Re: one of my poems.
« Reply #11 on: February 08, 2014, 05:02:16 PM »
Amazing poem!
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